Mochi stepped out of the staff elevator and took a deep breath as the doors opened on the penthouse floor. The hallway stretched quiet and undisturbed, the same as earlier, but now, something had shifted in her.
She should’ve been scared. Instead, she felt… steady. This wasn’t fiction, but all those late nights with Agatha Christie and Sherlock Holmes had trained her for something.
She wasn’t just here to clean anymore.
You’ve read enough late-night whodunits to know what to do, she told herself. This isn’t fiction. But maybe that’s why you’re ready.
Her footsteps echoed softly as she made her way back to the suite. Her hands didn’t shake this time. Her heart still beat fast, but it was steadier now, fueled with purpose rather than fear.
She pulled out her staff keycard, swiped it, and stepped inside.
The room was just as she had left it. The eerie quiet, the tipped-over furniture, the lingering air of something off. But now, instead of dread, she felt focused.
“I’m going to clean this place spotless…” she whispered to herself. “… but first, I’m gathering every clue this room has to offer. Mr. Fido might want it buried, but I’m not ready to let it go.”
She slipped off her gloves and pulled out her phone, camera ready.
She began in the master bedroom, the epicenter of the blood. The stain on the floor had dried slightly, darkening like rust. It was more than just a drop, it had pooled. Someone had bled here.
She crouched, snapping photos from different angles, then gently lifted the bed skirt. The comforter had been shoved underneath, crumpled and messy.
What were they trying to hide?
She tugged it free and shook it out, half expecting something to fall. Nothing did.
Her eyes darted to the corners of the room, the side tables, the baseboards. She dropped to her knees and opened drawers, feeling around behind them.
Her fingers brushed against fabric.
She gently pulled it out of its hiding place. A delicate monogrammed handkerchief, the letters M.M. stitched in navy thread on the corner.
“Aha,” she breathed. “Hello, first real clue.”
She photographed it before carefully slipping it into her apron pocket.
No more blood. No more physical signs of violence. No broken glass or weapons. But the sense of disorder was still everywhere, like a silent scream had echoed through the space and left its imprint.
She swept the rest of the rooms with equal care: guest bedrooms, the living room, even the closets. Nothing. The disarray was surface-level, as if someone had been looking for something, or trying to cover something up.
She saved the kitchen for last. It was habit, but this time, it was strategic. Kitchens were prime hiding spots in half the mystery books she’d read. A character’s garbage often said more than their words.
The garbage bin was nearly full. She braced herself, pulling out the trash liner and rifling gently through the contents.
There it was. A torn scrap of paper stuck to the bottom.
She smoothed it out against the counter.
“… meet you soon with my money, darling.”
No name. But expensive stationery. And a watermark.

Mochi frowned.
“Blackmail? Maybe a payoff gone wrong?”
She photographed the note, then slipped it carefully into a plastic bag she kept in her pocket for dirty gloves. Today, it had a higher purpose.
She put it into her pocket, next to another plastic bag that contained the monogrammed handkerchief.
Her brain buzzed with questions, but one thing was clear. Whatever happened, it started, and ended, in the master bedroom.
She started cleaning. With more care now. No detail left unnoticed.
But just as she was wiping down the sink, a thought struck her cold.
The office.
She hadn’t checked it earlier. Not during the first walkthrough. Not until now.
Her pulse picked up again.
What if… someone was still here?
She paused. Strained her ears.
Silence.
Still, she approached the door cautiously. Her hand hovered on the knob. She counted to three.
Then she pushed it open.
The room was empty.
She let out a long, shuddering breath and pressed her palm to her chest.
“Okay,” she whispered. “Last one. Just finish this.”
She moved mechanically now, exhaustion starting to creep in. But her attention stayed razor-sharp. She wiped down the desk, dusted the windowsill. When she bent to clean beneath the drawers, something caught her eye.
Tucked behind the bottom drawer, almost invisible, was a note. A half crumpled note. As if stuffed in haste.
She pulled it free and unfolded it.

It looked like …. A code?
It made no sense to her. At least, not yet.
She took a photo, and folded the note gently into a third plastic bag, and pocketed it.
“That’s for later,” she muttered.
She finished cleaning the rest of the office, and stepped back into the hallway. Her body felt heavy now. Tension, stress, and adrenaline was finally giving way to fatigue.
But her mind was still sharp.
“I think it’s a good idea to go home now,” she murmured. “I’ve got clues to sort through, and a mystery to solve.”
She double checked the apartment, locked the door, and made her way to the locker room.
Her shift ended with the usual checkout routine, except today, her apron was filled not with cleaning tools, but with evidence.
She left through the staff exit into the late afternoon sun, her bag slung over her shoulder, her hand protectively over the clues inside her bag.
She didn’t see Mr. Fido watching her from the upper lobby window, expression unreadable, hands clasped behind his back.
But he saw her.
And he knew.
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Beautiful ending to a thrilling story.
Thank you ☺️ i had so much fun writing this story
Just loved the surprise
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Awesome 👌
You are very gifted
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